Bad environment, filled with trash
enthusiastic and curious boys
have a bag they found
almost lost it
to the police
on the run
they run
and run
away they run
almost caught
time and time again
always running
from the trash
with the trash
back to the trash
live on trash
live off trash
live with trash
cannot escape
all the trash
in a world
based around
made around
trash
The repetition and narrowing of your lines really gives a sense of urgency and panic.
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